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Tom's wedding speech

Maya's older brother Tom is getting married in July. Maya is best person and has to give a speech. She has been rehearsing in her head for weeks but can't get the opening right. Worries about being funny vs sincere.

Aurelia’s note

You keep circling the opening line. Every draft you've actually liked has been the honest one — I think you already know which way this goes.

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